Friday, 21 February 2020

THE STRAPFORD POUND PAGE 15 (PART 02 of 5) - Drooling Dependence!





Dear Pink & Fluffi Peoples...
The Best Way to create Happy Obedient Sissy Pets is... A Strict & Rigid Daily Training  & Conditioning Schedule combined with Rewards & Discipline. ;-p :)

Over on my Patreon,  I'm currently working on rough out design ideas, as I attempt to create a PrincessVille Sissy Punishment Outfit Pin-Up. :)

 
Pink & Fluffiness to ALL...
K@T ^^

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5 comments:

Anonymous said...

I'm always conflicted with that kind of comics, because on one hand I love the aesthetic, body modification and extreme sex training... and on the other hand it's people being horrifically tortured for no reason and being told they're inferior by people whose only claim to superiority is that they haven't been horrifically tortured themselves, and I'm really not into that.

K@tscandy, your art is very hot. If I may ask, though (and I hope it doesn't come out as rude or as if I think I have any right to dictate anything to you, it isn't my intention at all), would you have any interest in a story where someone actually agrees to be turned into an extensively bodymodded sissy or bimbo (without their mind or intelligence being destroyed) without being forced or tricked, just because they love the idea of it happening to them and love their master/mistress (who also loves them and their other subs)?

Or a story about someone who was turned into a bodymodded sissy/bimbo against their will but find a master/mistress who while still being a kinky as hell dom still love their new sub as a person and want to give them an happy, sex-filled life as their pet rather than pilling misery upon misery on them and inflicting fates worse than death on them?

KatsCandy said...

PART 1 of 2
Hi Anonymous...
This probably won’t help, but when I wrote these stories, I considered all the submissive and transformed characters to have deep seeded submissive sides with a humiliation or degradation kink, usually with any apprehension to submitting being solely because of their own discomfort for going against the social acceptance norms or for fear of what their partner may think of them... So while they may outwardly object, inside a part of them is enjoying giving in to those scenario's.

So they’re very much been targeted towards Readers who have similar ‘humiliation kinks’, as the characters mental apprehension going in to certain situations are supposed to resonate with those ‘humiliation kink readers’.

In the past all the comics:
*) Tiffani’s transformed Tart
*) Amsterdamned Nites
*) Trophy Boi
*) Never Cross a Redneck
*) Always a Bride, Never a Man
&
*) The Strapford Pound

...They were all very much written with that mindset as well as what’s the easiest and kinkiest way to tell the story from Act 1 to Act 2 to Act 3.

Prior to the rewrite of the original Strapford Pound story I had written 6-8 years ago, that story was a lot darker. Even though there are still some ‘questionable’ bits in the revised story, they remained included in large part because of my own inadequacies as a writer, as I couldn’t think of a more effective or less blatant way to progress a characters arc or scene to where I needed it to be without potentially cutting corners or dragging certain scenario’s on far, far longer than they should be.

For example on page 2 or 3 (of the Strapford Pound) in the store where Whitney is being physically ‘held by Her arms’ by the security guard as Selena tries to talk with her... I very much dislike this particular part for the physicality.
HOWEVER the alternative was drawing another 20-30 Frames of conversation to tell the amount of story which I would have required for Selena to convince Whitney to do as She commanded.
(I’m sure there are writers who could have written that 20-30 frame conversation in a few frames, but I consider myself to be an amateur writer at best, so with my scripting I tend to write far, far more text than what’s usually required) and I’m not always the best editor when it comes to cropping the story down.

With those past comics I never really thought about just what exactly ‘the situations, scenario’s and the context of the characters willingness meant, because I always felt (and even now at times) like I had to make each and every scenario more interesting or more extreme than the last... In many, many cases far more extreme than even I feel comfortable with.
More to Follow...

KatsCandy said...

PART 2 of 2

To answer your question, I would be interested in writing stories where the submissive parties are more agreeable, however I don’t know if I’m a skilled enough writer to make such stories ‘interesting’.

I’ve started the ‘PRiNCESSViLLE’ Comic series in part to counter all those previous comics and the ‘dark scenario’s’ many of them had. PrincessVille is a consentual lifestyle community of Dominants and submissives.
I’m still working out the so called kinks with the formats, but the aim for these scenario’s is a character doing something wrong and then the consequences being something to show them the error of their ways.

I hope I answered your question ok, as I really have rambled-on a little bit, sorry. ^_^

PInk & Fluffiness
K@T


P.S. LASTLY IF IT WILL HELP AND A POTENTIAL STRAPFORD POUND SPOILER AHEAD FOR THE LAST PAGE, DON’T READ IF YOU DON’T WANT TO KNOW...

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Anonymous said...

Thank you for your answer! Glad to read your perspective on it.

I do think you're a skilled enough writer to make stories where the subs want to be here interesting, don't sell yourself short.

I get the humiliation angle but I really don't think that it'd be any less interesting or fetishy if a) the sub knows what they're getting into and still want it b) they aren't coerced or tricked and c) if there is no twists to make things crueler like 'well I said I'd spare your family but in fact nah". Might just be a question of tastes, though. I'm defintitively interested in where PrincesseVille goes, in any case.

As for the pacing thing, yeah, I agree it's pretty hard. Probably even harder in a webcomic/episodic comic format, given how many other authors struggle with it.

Still, I really think you're selling yourself short as a writer, because a few tweaks is all it'd takes.

Ex, to take a situation similar to the Strapford Pound early part you mentioned: lady is working in a dead-end job far below what she is capable of to get her sister through to college and is troubled by her husband being distant. Cue smoking hot, authoritarian dominatrix entering the store and revealing that not only her husband's been cheating on her, but her sister's actually taking advantage of her and is using all that money for her leisure rather than for school. Dead-end Job lady is crushed, and realize even if she knows that she just doesn't have the spine to oppose either of the assholes so she'll keep suffering into the role they put on her. Dominatrix goes "well since you're already someone's dog, why don't you at least have fun with it?", lady agrees, is put in a fetish dog suit like in Strapford Pound, and gets driven to town for a bout of exhibitionism. Then Dominatrix drops the lady home with her business call and tells her something like "when you're ready to submit to someone who appreciate what a good pup you are, call me."

Not much changed when it comes down to the events, but it does show the pet wants it and puts real choice in their hand.

In any case, thank you once again for the response, and I wish you the best of luck for your projects present and future!

KatsCandy said...

Hi Anonymous
Sorry for the belated reply, I was ill last week and I’ve spent this week trying to catch up on with everything else.

Well part of the reason for the “'well I said I'd spare your family but in fact nah" twist was because of how I had to turn the original story into a comic (rather than the originally laid out ‘image-captioned-story’ with different individuals), it meant having to add meaning to potentially incohesive images.
...And the best way I could think to do that was with such a twist, although I feel I should clarify that the character of Magnolia did whole-heartedly agree to become a human-pet (just perhaps not a pugly). :-s

What you said with your storyline variation would have made much more sense, I just could see that line of story while I was writing it. :-s

My Original idea (The one which would have dragged out for another 30+ frames) was to have Selena forming a relationship with Whitney with regular visits to the store to woo & seduce Whitney, essentially become Her Sugar-Mummy, Giving Whitney Expensive Gifts & inviting Whitney to partake in Events & Experiences which Whitney would have been financially unable to afford otherwise...

But then Selena withdraws some of Her generosity putting Whitney in the position of having to spend her own money & burying herself in debt. At which time Selena’s would offer her a lifeline if She would agree to do a couple of humiliating things while they were at an expensive country club.
& Once fully under the thumb, then Selena would reveal Whitney's husbands indiscretions.

Thank you for your post Anonymous. :)