Saturday, 24 June 2017

THE STRAPFORD POUND PAGE 4 (Part 1 of 5) - Pussy Humper!

Dear Pink & Fluffi Peoples, I hope You've all been well and having very lovely Summers so far. The Heat has not been my Friend this June. :-s 

Sorry for the Wait in-Between Posts, Page 5 of the Strapford Pound took me A LOT longer than I had anticipated to create, so I didn't want to post any of Page 4 until My Patrons had all of Page 5. 

Thank You to My Wonderful Patrons for Voting For Whitney's Fairy-Puppy Outfit.  :) 
 
With the Collar & Ear-Piece in Place, Whitney goes for 
Her First Walkies Under Lady Selena's Control!
  Check Back Next Week for Page 4 (Part 2 of 5).

Page 5 Has Just been Posted in its Entirety on My Patreon...  
All the Publicly Posted (FREE) Pages So Far can be found ***HERE***
New Pages will Continue to be Updated Here (and on My Social Media Pages), Although My PATREON FOLLOWERS will ALWAYS have EARLY FIRST ACCESS to these Pages as soon as they are Created...

I Hope you all Enjoy, Pink & Fluffiness
K@T ^^
 
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6 comments:

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    1. Thank you Marco, I'm so happy you're enjoying it. :)

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  2. I think I know what's going on here, but I feel like I missed something because of how much this jumped around all of a sudden.

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    1. Hi Unknown,
      If you're referring to the implication of a Golden Shower, you would be correct. :)

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    2. Nah, more just the overall story. Like one second she just put on the collar and it's use was shown, then the next three panels the one person has no pants, there's a golden shower, she's in a new and extreme outfit outside, and so on. It's just the story went from slowly developing as she's shown what dirt the one woman has on her to having 10 things happen off camera in the span of 3 panels. It's still very good, would just like to see more development and progression from point A to point B, instead of it feeling like a dream where events rapidly flash by one after the other with vague connection.

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    3. I completely understand what you mean. When i was laying out the frames, I thought the same thing.
      Since I'm not a natural comic book artist and more of a story-boarder, I do tend to think much in the same way you mentioned in your reply. So cutting even the most minor of moments is very hard for me to do.
      But my main aim for this comic has been to keep the script editing in mind and to fearlessly cut any frames or text which I don't feel add to the story progression, visual or otherwise.

      So by skipping those little moments like a character taking off her trousers, or the security-guard locking the door, Whitney changing into the second outfit etc... It was my hope that the text itself would help bridge the gap so that the reader could still follow.

      But the transitions between those moments probably could have been done in much better ways. :)

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